Thursday 25 July 2019

Winter

In my class we have been doing winter writing  and learning to use adjectives, similes, and specific nouns.
I enjoyed writing about winter because it was easy to describe. I found it tricky to peer assess.



Outside, frosty cold trees blow in the chilly wind. Stiff grass crunches under every slow step. Up in the sky, still dark grey misty air feels cold and alone.


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